Strengths
- Use of split screens- Conversations on the phone
- Cross cutting between locations
- Good titles as they fit the genre
- Clear narrative
- Good establishing shots
- Music choice
Areas of improvement
- Bad audio, record audio of first conversation again- Bad fade out
- Music quiet when walking through doors, subtle
- Jump cuts on shoes
- Rain during inside phone call
- Sharpen editing
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